Meeting With The NHS About The Presention

Points to improve on:

• Provide more visuals to show the view what room the bear is in. Also to add a number on the front door.
• Shorten the leaving the kitchen and going up the stairs sequence. It isn't needed as the next sequence will be in the bedroom.
• We are going to remove the bed suffocation sequence as this is a topic already covered in detail by the NHS.
• We will instead include a burn sequence including a kettle or straighteners.
• Add other dangers in the background of the scenes, this way after it has been presented the audience could be asked if they saw any other dangers in the video.
• The music needs to be improved as it is too repetitive. (we are already working with someone to improve the music.)

Points that worked:

• The colour choices reflect a typical house and also make the bear gender neutral.
• The music is a very good contrast to the baby crying at the end of the video.
• The dangers are illustrated in a way that doesn't distress the viewer, but doesn't tread too lightly on the subject.
• Over all the video isn't too long and holds the viewers attention.